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    I really like this, it's rich and warm. Even the spider looks approachable.

    Abby-Helen

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    Thanks Dave Hundreds.

    Dear and Abby-Helen... yay! someone likes my spider!

    Dear, a publisher has shown interest, and the author and I have sent a presentation to them. It now goes through the selection committee process, and if commissioned, will most likely be published at the end of 2009 (at the very earliest, I'd think)... quite possibly even early 2010. The publishing world has its own sense of time and space! But, watch this space, I'll be sure to let you know.

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    Something about the moon?......
    That's what i saw too. I think the moon is in front of the web! (check your layers Dogtrombone ) or the opacity is to much...

    Overall i like it AND yes the font rocks.... tell!!!

    I don't think the spider is scary, because of the fairies, indeed.

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    the term "NIIIIIIIIIIICE!!" comes to mind!

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    Hermie... so, it's a small moon! Thanks, you've got a point there... the web is white so it's getting lost against the white of the moon... I'll look to give the web some more definition in that area. Good call.

    Thanks weca(spider)web!

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    Originally posted by dogtrombone

    Thanks weca(spider)web!
    LOL

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    Awesome!
    Maybe the very realistic rendering will help deal with arachniphobia.
    Great detail on the web and background with the dandelions and shrooms.

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    I agree with the moon being a bit off, and I'm not sure I really like the face in it...I'd like to see something more like... http://images.elfwood.com/fanq/r/e/r...ougecollab.jpg...well not quite like that, but if you've seen the movie Moulin Rouge, that's what the drawing is supposed to have been like. Also the spider does seem a bit scary...perhaps just making it a bit smaller would make it better, as it does seem a bit big for its web anyways.

    That's just my 3 cents worth...(i went over by a cent!)

    Great Work!!!!

    - Andrew

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    Cool!

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    I thought I posted this but it must have gotten lost in my off-topic batch. I really really like the layout overall, but I really think u need to make it much more simple on the right. Think Beatrice Potter. Technically it's superb, but little ones are not really up on that kinda stuff, at least they weren't 20 years ago when i edited a few kiddie rhymes. But perhaps now parents read to 3-year olds while the little buggers watch movies on a nano and await kiddie emails to come in on the blackberry jr.
    coocoo

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