Battle 1 "new stylish wrist watch made by sony"(CLOSED)

[jovan]

Maybe next time!

Good work everybody

[mkeefe]

I figured I would take the time to comment on each entry.

PLisKeN
I like the concept, it is just what Sony would create. Oh and the logo has similarities with VAIO and WEGA... Congrats!

joe roe
The concept is a good one, but it reminds me of the aids/cancer/armstrong bracelets.

mountain lady
I like the Photoshop work you put into it, but Sony wouldn't create a standard watch and that had to be factored in.

jovan
Good design and nice layout, the only thing I would change is add some more "techy" appeal.

koha_onan
Good Photoshop work in this one, but a few things threw me off... (I am very critical) You changed Sony's logo and the numbers are hard to read

Warmodder
Your didn't load for me, but when it does I will comment


So there you have it, my comments on Battle 1... on to Battle 2

Matt

[jovan]

Fun with comments on the work!!

Jovan

[cfire]

Here's my C&C:

PLisKeN~Congrats on the win! I like the whole thing, excellent concept, nice job on the layout, the logo is sweet. The only slight crits I might offer are that the buttons text look like Nintendo and the watchs are a tad large and look like they'd be uncomfortable(but that's a product design thing anyway so not to worry. ) All in all really good work.

joe roe~ I agree with matt on the Armstrong bracelet part. Plus the bracelet itself looks a bit flat, try addding more highlights (shine) here and there like mayve some glare on the screen etc. Still a nice job, I like the "thin" concept.

mountain lady~ Nice watches but just not very "Sony"

jovan~Nice job, I like the map, it fits well with that style watch but again I agree with Matt when I think Sony I think tech.

koha_onan~ These also don't look like Sony to me. The beveled text looks a bit out of place particularly on the watch faces themselves. The white on the link gradients is a bit extreme. Nice start and I know you did them quickly so considering that good job.

Warmodder~Nice looking layout, very clean. Are they 100% PS? (btw all, 100% PS means no pics, scans oe other programs) If so really nice work. Once again though, not very "Sony" like. A bit late for consideration in the judging but thanks for the entry, you need to get in these more (and so do lots more people too.

Thanks all and I look forward to Battle 2.

[Edited on 2/8/2006 by cfire]

[Warmodder]

Oops on the 100% ps part. I'll try and stick around more often though.

@mkeefe: not sure why it didn't load, must just be stupid imageshack acting up again.

Anyways, woohoo for battle 2!

[mountain lady]

Congrats Plisken!
And Matt and Frank thanks for the crits.
I think they were all great entries. It will be interesting to see the cars that come rolling out.

[koha_onan]

Congrats to plisken and Jovan and all of you for participating to this first battle.
Thx to the judges for the crits, very helpfull. I hope we'll be more in the next battle.
Could each one of us help to promote the battles ?



Battle 2 theme : ' Your Futuristic car '

don't miss the rules :
100 % photoshop (no pics, scans or other programs)

size 800x600 72dpi

battle end saturday 25th feb 2006 midnight

new rule for the next battle : next battle theme is chosen by the winner.


[Edite le 9/2/2006 par koha_onan]

[Edite le 9/2/2006 par koha_onan]

[PLisKeN]

Hi all !
Sorry I didn't reply sooner, I was in holiday!

Well thank you all! A great first battle!! Happy to win but nice work of all!
And thank to judges to take time on comments!!
Ok I'll try to be on the next one!

PLisKeN

[morkelkey]

Hi, Who are wearing a bracelets ?

Good news for those people who wearing a Armstrong Bracelets ! We are providing same type of bracelets. This is cheap to Armstrong.