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[SINSINATI]

hello everybuddy,
this is my first attempt ot make a sign, i call this sign "I can see you" , i need crits/comments and advice to improve it



[Edited on 4/27/2005 by SINSINATI]

[Hannu]

I like it a lot. First attempt??? The only thing I would change is the red stroke. Somehow breaks the otherwise nice style.

[SINSINATI]

so u prefer to remove the stroke for good or just to change its color?

[Hannu]

I don't know. I would do some experimenting, maybe break the colour to not so pure red. Also changes in opacity could fade it a bit.

[SINSINATI]

thanx , i will try different maneuvers and see what comes out.

[JustMadMike]

i really like it, but i do agree about the stroke. i like the background and border. nice work
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Michael

[Edited on 4/28/2005 by JustMadMike]

[SINSINATI]

Hi Hannu and Michael,
thanx for the comment,
here is another version, waiting for c+c,

[Hannu]

Looks good to me. Now it contrasts nicely to the background. The eyes on the letters are very impressive.

[SINSINATI]

thanx for your useful comments Hannu, I really appreciate it.

[JustMadMike]

yeah looks sweet. good work