Brochure Design

[ryuneo]

Hi

Been a while since I posted here I have been working on this brochure for a wheelchair company, could you guys please have a scan through and let me know what you think. http://www.ryuneo.com/cyclone.htm

Thanks

Ryan

[John Hughes]

Couldn't find any flaws!

[magneto243]

Now thats what i call off road wheel charing lol Nice work . What kind of fold is it?

[Edited on 11/12/2004 by magneto243]

[kiwicolin]

I think it looks really good. Eye catching, only thing is the radial blur on the wheel is not centered and I think it looks a bit much

[V*diz]

Very cool..... I like the techy feel and those blues are awsome!

diz

[scottperezfox]

Looks good but be mindful of how it is going to be printed - I'd hate to see all that gridwork get blurred and lose its effect. Also, you might wanna make the while boxes a bit more opaque so you can read the text easier.

[Stevesvlbabe]

Originally posted by kiwicolin
I think it looks really good. Eye catching, only thing is the radial blur on the wheel is not centered and I think it looks a bit much

I tend to agree with colin on that one. Perhaps you should try a slight motion blur instead of radial. Also the tyres on that wheel chair look like those off a mountain bike. Pretty cool though, Paralympians (spelling?) would love those tyres.

[dirtychinchilla]

i like it alot, but im gonna say it again, the blur looks off, and you should chage the opacity

[ryuneo]

Thanks for the feedback guys. I have to be honest and say that I cheat by adding a radial blur to the chair wheel, thought it would be much quicker than selecting inbetween those spoke. Think i'm going to spend the time and select the wheel properly.

As for the printing i'm not sure how it's going to turn out so I have sent off for a print then I can check it as needed then make the corrections. The brochure will be printed as A3 and then folded as A4.

Cheers

Ryan