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  1. 06-12-2004, 05:55 PM #1
    freecis
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    Ocean view

    What do you think about this view ?? :>
    Any C & C to improve this work will be very appreciated..
    It's Here !!

    [Edited on 13-6-2004 by freecis]
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  2. 06-13-2004, 02:38 PM #2
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    thats nice, its got a watercolour feel about it.
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  3. 06-13-2004, 03:23 PM #3
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    I felt chalk pastels actually...
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  4. 06-13-2004, 03:35 PM #4
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    would be good to see the effect used in a pic with more to it.
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  5. 06-13-2004, 07:07 PM #5
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    And what about now ??
    I've added some new layers..
    Ocean v.1,5

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  6. 06-13-2004, 07:53 PM #6
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    nice.
    is that a parasol?
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  7. 06-13-2004, 08:33 PM #7
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    That's what I'm presuming...

    Nice one! The gap between the parasol and its reflection is rather worrying...
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  8. 06-13-2004, 10:04 PM #8
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    A parasol? You guys kill me.

    It's good, I'd consider rather than a straight cut at the bottom of the bobber to have it rounded, like a half-ellipse.
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  9. 06-14-2004, 01:08 AM #9
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    I think the water looks too fibrous...kind of like felt...there are some good water tuts around you could try playing with...I did one HERE (not that I'm saying it's particularly good - but it is a tut!) & a cloud one HERE

    You're doing nicely though...it has a nice stillness to it...but as pointed out, there's a gap between the buoy/bobber/parasol & the reflection
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