Iris: Needs work?

[Phil_The_Rodent]

What do you think? What does it need? Just working at it because I didn't think the radial blur: zoom one had a good organic feel. Maybe it does, heck. Just working at it. :)

http://www.visualrevolution.com/~phil/images/iriswork.jpg

[Rabb17_106]

hmmm... looks good! but i dont think that the retina looks like it is part of the eye (it looks like it has just been whacked on top) maybe it needs some reflection on it? i dunno...

[TechZsue]

i agree the black part doesn't blend in. maybe because the texture in behind had the effect of moving inwards. (not sure how to explain it, sorry)



[Edited on 13-6-2003 by TechZsue]

[Area+browN]

The Black part (Lense / Iris) looks as if its outside, leaving it unshaded and flat. The actual eye looks brill ! but the black circle needs to be slightly opaque, maybe with some highlights, Have a look at some pictures of some real eyes.

[ Eye 1 ] (http://www.eyegroup.com/images/eye.gif)

[ Eye 2 ] (http://www.uneptie.org/outreach/wssd/graphics/eye-large.gif)

[ Eye 3 ] (http://www.lesoff.co.za/artline/Index%20Images/Eye.JPG)

Love the eye, just not the black circle ! nice. :D
Hope I was of some help.
-Matty

[Urban Grafix®]

Phil...try pinching it just a lil. and see what happends

[Blitz]

I think a small Gaussian Blur will do the trick