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06-01-2003, 02:17 PM
There was a photo contest in my town and the winner gets 200$, the deadline hasent closed yet but here are my entries...
they were taken on a canon eos rebel ti and then i had them put it on a photocd when i got them developed at CVS
[Edited on 1-6-2003 by Evan3037]
[Edited on 3-6-2003 by Evan3037]
06-03-2003, 01:38 PM
Both are nice shots. The greens are nice and intense.
shot 1, I like the composition a lot. Nice use of the shore line to draw the eye into the piece. Only critique is that there is a slight haze on the right side of the photo because of the bright sky. Judges may look at that.
Shot 2, Exposure is nice, but i feel that there's no real subject therefore my eye sticks to the middle of the photo. If you had cropped this into a panorama or zoomed in either on the trees or the river alone, it would be a stronger photo.
Best of luck!
06-04-2003, 02:50 AM
#1- good color but bleeds of to the right. I would have liked to see the dock(?) more off center. (I use the rule of thirds very often when composing a pix.) The bend of the wall draws the viewer into the frame, but then has no where to go.
#2 good composition. I'm drawn into it, The foregraoud appears over exposed. Could it be burned a bit?
What are you going to but with the $200?? Good luck
06-05-2003, 04:29 AM
the skys look really faint and theres a glow around the trees and the sky (digital camera effect). I would go in photoshop and retouch it (levels & colour correction). I like the first picture more because it has a foreground, middleground, and background.
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