In Love!

[goldberg]

I'm working on this.
What would you do diffrent?
Thanks for all comments
Click here (http://www.ruffner.ch/photoshop/tutorials1.jpg)

[AMG]

pink woukld be better than blue, and she is too dark, start there

[Davey]

Would have to say the same thing as AMG.
but doesn't really need to be pink, but it's a nice idea.
Something bright would be good also.

the text is also hard to read.

not gonna say anything about the scanlines for now because first need to the adjustments ;)

[fotodog]

Nice start.

The only thing I'd do is fade the blue from center to edge to see a little more of your love's face!

[Pitch Black]

very nice idea. as above, i think it's a little too dark, needs some sparkle

[V_Chrizz]

Yeah very nice idea! Maybe you could make the scan lines a bit more prominent, dunno if it would work, worth a try!

[goldberg]

Hello
Thanks for all tips and infos.
I have try to change the color
and the fonts.
new version (http://www.ruffner.ch/photoshop/tutorials1.jpg)

[Edited on 23-4-2003 by goldberg]

[Dissen]

In Love!

"What would i do different?"
Well, work implementing the person one love indicates that the loved one should be in it. So - i would have to exchange the girl with mine! :)

Im just kidding...i should really give you a serious advice but please forgive me, im too tired this morning :)

No wait...i remember something a teacher of mine once said to me. I was sitting at school and painting (oil/canvas) one evening. I was trying to paint a photo of a girl i was madly in love with. I painted it just as i saw it - copied colours and everuthing from the photo - and i actually felt good about it. Then my teacher entered the room - looked at the painting for a few minutes and said; "so, this girl is a really colorful and lively person?"
I answered "Eh..no not really. she's more like shy and a bit quiet.."
-"Then why dont you paint her like that?" he said.

I looked at the painting and saw that it didnt in any way reflect the person i was trying to paint. It was a flat copy of a photo and i got the colors of her sweater and hair correct but it didnt reflect any of my feelings for her.

That was my first real lesson in the importance of colours and in trying to paint feelings/emotions and not just exactly what i see.

I dont know if this was much help for you, but it's def something to have in mind. The pic of your girl is very violet/pink...romantic colours. One doesnt have to know in advance that you are in love. But, i just ask, is it not just a tiny bit too much "sugar" here? You know her, so you know the answer :)

[tukinu]

Dissen mate, I think I also just learned that lesson :D Thanks for it.

Goldberg, do what Dissen says and it will be great, you know where to find me for questions :lol :lol
-Tukinu

[Dissen]

Originally posted by tukinu
Dissen mate, I think I also just learned that lesson :D Thanks for it.
-Tukinu

I will forward the thanks to my old teacher - if i ever meet him again..:)

[bhimpfen]

make colors bit darker and add picture frame

[einitial]

very pretty, i like it...just one suggestion:

hum......it looks abit "cropped", like the girl is slipping off the picture, or should I just said she's off centered?...I think either put her in dead center or put her aside, now she's in a very uncomfortable position.

oh, and great lesson Dissen!! :)