Introduction

[max309]

Hi guys, its been a long time since i wasnt around here...well this post is for a job i have to do for introduction to visual languaje in collage, (im in multimedia design) the job was to remake in my case a painting of Roberto Matta "Sin titulo", taking its mayor compositing points for make my image...

And well, this come up...i couldnt find his painting in the web for post it too, a shame. Any way, C&C welcome.




http://bp2.blogger.com/_lqE_Bv855Ys/R9Z9Z_cvfgI/AAAAAAAAAIs/z2rytGFEW70/s1600/Visual3.jpg

[rAyVoLvEz]

I think for most parts of it, the image looks over-exposed, too bright, contrast/saturation seems to be over the top.

Just my 2c worth.

[The Scotsman]

I'm not seeing anything Max.:blush

[max309]

Well i dont see it neither...it was there the las time lol
this is the link...sorry Jim

www.maxbp.blogspot.com - its the last post

And Elaine, yes i know...i made it on porpose, that was one of the caracteristics of the picture that i named.

[EndYourSearch]

ray, this image is of a painting but I dont know what the painting looks like either. So obviously that means we cant crit it the same way you will be judged on it =(.

[rAyVoLvEz]

Originally posted by EndYourSearch
ray, this image is of a painting but I dont know what the painting looks like either. So obviously that means we cant crit it the same way you will be judged on it =(.

My 2c worth again.
However subjective art can be, there's always an objective angle to it.

By the title given in the first post, this seems to be the original artist's work : http://www.rogallery.com/matta_roberto/w-393/matta-Sin_Titulo.html

My original views/opinions still stand.