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jrock2004
01-28-2008, 07:48 PM
I am currently reading a book but before that here is the first real photshop job I did


http://jrock2004.net/images/header1.gif

What do you guys think?

[Edited on 2/4/2008 by jrock2004]

[Edited on 2/4/2008 by jrock2004]

rAyVoLvEz
01-29-2008, 01:23 AM
Its pretty clean.

But I dont like having my eyes to look into 4 corners.

jrock2004
01-29-2008, 02:02 PM
Thank you so the 4 corner thing should go away or color or size changes?

the_biggest_lebowski
01-29-2008, 02:10 PM
Rather than in the corners, try running the text in a straight line under your name.

jrock2004
01-30-2008, 01:35 AM
Ok made some changes


http://jrock2004.net/images/header2.jpg

[Edited on 2/4/2008 by jrock2004]

[Edited on 2/4/2008 by jrock2004]

Deanozzy
01-30-2008, 01:45 AM
Like it better, but too much fading and cloud effect

rAyVoLvEz
01-30-2008, 11:05 AM
Give up the clouds.

And I'm wondering what is the significance of "2004", I honestly wouldnt hire someone from the "2004".

jrock2004
01-30-2008, 01:05 PM
I too think that I need a new title. I think I might have to make that change. But now I must think to what.

jrock2004
02-04-2008, 11:20 PM
Ok I understand that I had to make changes. So I made some changes so lets see what you guys think now


http://www.jrock2004.net/pro-sig2.jpg

rAyVoLvEz
02-05-2008, 01:03 AM
I cant read the text properly..

and u really should give up the clouds effect.

Good design is simply the KIS rule (Keep it simple).

[Edited on 2/5/2008 by rAyVoLvEz]

jrock2004
02-05-2008, 02:00 AM
I did not use clouds. I used brushes which was not a cloud

jrock2004
02-05-2008, 02:10 AM
made a change but the text to the right needs work

Deanozzy
02-05-2008, 04:59 AM
Simple can be so strong and professional, Stick with the new name and forget the rest of text.

Deanozzy
02-05-2008, 05:11 AM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii21/Deanozzy/JC-WEB.jpg

Simple like this maybe?

[Edited on 2/5/2008 by Deanozzy]

StylizE
02-05-2008, 09:50 AM
not that good..

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[Edited on 2/5/2008 by StylizE]

Deanozzy
02-05-2008, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by StylizE
not that good..

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[Edited on 2/5/2008 by StylizE]

Sorry I am not up to your standards. I've had photoshop less than 2 months and learning. Just wanted to help.

sachindevil
02-05-2008, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by jrock2004
Ok I understand that I had to make changes. So I made some changes so lets see what you guys think now


http://www.jrock2004.net/pro-sig2.jpg

Firstly do away with the html head ...... stuff at the right
cause if it is web concepts then it is understood that it will be all html and stuff like that.......

but if it is really important to display it then have a look at the sig used by Mkeefe. the way he displays his tools of trade is very cool.

And in the end i dont think black and red go very well together......( unless red is blood and black is darkness .... LOLzzzzzzz)