W.I.P....DETAILED MINDS

[Urban Grafix®]

Tell me what you guys/gals think...im working on an image for an add...here providied are B4 & After...still w.i.p...the image supplied looked kinda choppy also...im still making adjustments.

>>Before (http://www.visualrevolution.com/~UrbanGrafix/UGF/annette.jpe)

after:

http://www.visualrevolution.com/~UrbanGrafix/UGF/detailed.jpg

[Thmom]

it looks great. I wouldn't have known it was a lily had I not seen the original (not sure if that's good or bad lol)

but maybe I'm a ditz.... it seems like there is a joke here and I'm not getting it...

[Friction Graphics]

Nice work sir urban :) looks nice now :)

[Stellor]

I'm sorry, I've looked at this for 15 min. and the only thing that makes sense is your logo, which shouldn't be there. I don't understand what your trying to say. The flower no longer looks like a flower, is that important or are you just looking for a shape? ---comes up on your.....???? Nothing comes up in my mind to finish this statement.
I'll forgive the spelling (thats) because thats a W.I.P. . :lol

Sam

[Urban Grafix®]

Damn "S" always gets in the way.... LMAO...Thanx for that Stellor!

[loiosh]

Nice pic. I like the way you blended the two images together.

[torevaal]

Very nice so far...I would remove your logo thou, it's stealing the focus point.

-Tore

[sjkramer]

I'm a little lost as to what the concept for the ad is suppose to be ? It looks much better in the after though.

[TraXter]

I like how you burn those lil's to eachother.... Nice. Can't wait to see the finished one... :D

[scottperezfox]

Originally posted by Stellor
I'm sorry, I've looked at this for 15 min. and the only thing that makes sense is your logo, which shouldn't be there. I don't understand what your trying to say. The flower no longer looks like a flower, is that important or are you just looking for a shape? ---comes up on your.....???? Nothing comes up in my mind to finish this statement.


I totally agree with this.
My first thought was "what the hell?"
My second thought was "wait, what does that say, I didnt even notice the text"
My third thought was "that sentence doesnt make any sense"
My fourth thought was "why does he always brandish his logo so blatenly."

It will be interesting to see how you finish this piece.

[Urban Grafix®]

LOL...now I have Sisckle and Ebert here...lol...wow film & art critic...gotta love this place! :lol:lol:lol

[Phil_The_Rodent]

lol My favourite part was when he said remove the logo from your ad. :lol Seriously though, I'd move it though to just under where the lines meet as this is your focal point. Everything draws you here...

[Urban Grafix®]

LOL...imma take that into consideration Phil..thanx to everyone...U 2 Sisckle & Ebert im not gonna leave you guys outta this...but my main goal to this is Advertising for UGD and thats the Main aspect!
@ every1 Thanx...I'll keep you all updated on the Job! :)

[Stellor]

You didn't say the add was for yourself, but you still need to do something about the top sentence.

Sam

[Urban Grafix®]

Im aware of that Stellor...thanks for the reminder...but its still W.I.P!
LataZ!

[sonicfusion]

hey very nice, i think that thing suppose to be a flower, rite? what font u used in the top part? verdana?