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Paper_Joe
04-16-2004, 05:00 PM
I designed an Ad for Les schwab. It's for my high school newspaper.
so whatu think?:)
Les Shwab Ad (http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/Ad%20by%20JoE%20C.jpg)
[Edited on 16-4-2004 by Paper_Joe]
Aurenchaku
04-16-2004, 05:05 PM
Cool, but, one spelling error. It's "safely". :D Other than that, I like it.
- Auren
Edit: Oh, and the post connecting to the little box thing doesn't seem like it connects right. I *think* the box should be tilted a little bit forward, or maybe make the post on an angle, like the sign.
[Edited on 16-4-2004 by Aurenchaku]
Paper_Joe
04-16-2004, 05:06 PM
Originally posted by Aurenchaku
Cool, but, one spelling error. It's "safely". :D Other than that, I like it.
- Auren
crap I am so bad at spelling. I had to fix 3 spelling errors before this.
roogog
04-17-2004, 02:23 PM
yeah the perspective is slightly off with the components of the sign post.
Was also gonna say tires was spelt wrong but then noticed it was an american ad...you yanks and your spelling :D
[Edited on 17-4-2004 by roogog]
Ashworks
04-17-2004, 02:54 PM
dont like the bevels. in fact, if there were no bevels id probably say
WOW!! WAY TO GO!!!
but i am post-poning my "WAY WAY TO GO"
for when i see it without bevels. :lol
nice work
Blitz
04-17-2004, 04:44 PM
i really like it, nice and simple and definately doesnt look like a newbie did it. try stretching the beveled red piece further than the canvas, itll make it [does not know word!?]
nice job m8
Paper_Joe
04-18-2004, 01:08 AM
Is this better?:D
Les Shwabio (http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/Copy%20of%20Les%20Schwab%20Ad%20by%20JoE%20C%20cop y.jpg)
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