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jtolenti
03-28-2004, 09:43 AM
my first grunge.

HERE (http://home.comcast.net/~jasontolentino/mosh1jpg.jpg)
Viika
03-28-2004, 10:44 AM
too much darkness in my opinion, but the center's very good :)
constructivist
03-28-2004, 05:23 PM
Yeah, enlarge the center and let the darkness/grunge elements sneak up on the band.
jtolenti
03-28-2004, 09:09 PM
thats for the suggestions!

is this more along the lines of what you are talking about - as far as the lighting?

HERE (http://home.comcast.net/~jasontolentino/mosh.jpg)
constructivist
03-28-2004, 09:39 PM
Nice improvement!
Viika
03-29-2004, 11:26 AM
much better now! :)
emm
03-29-2004, 12:03 PM
Yes, much better without all the black!!
- Of course, keeping some of it makes the illusion of distance...
:)

[Edited on 29-3-04 by emm]